Practice with a filed example. Begin with the historical FTC example, or choose one of the dated opportunities below. The old FTC window is for practice only. The complete book and its other tools remain under review.
1. See what the citizen asked for
The issue is what public enforcers should be able to see before a merger changes a market. The submitted comment asks for stronger reporting of control, ownership and effects on citizens. Read it as a citizen’s argument, not an agency finding.
“The public should not find out about the harm only after the market has already been changed.”
Notice the sequence: name the public consequence, explain the reporting gap, then ask the responsible agencies for a specific change.
Read the complete filed FTC comment
Citizen Comment on FTC-2026-0298
Premerger Notification Reporting Requirements
Executive Summary
This comment urges the agencies to strengthen—not dilute—the premerger notification process. In already concentrated markets, weaker reporting rules do not reduce burden so much as reduce visibility, making it easier for powerful firms to consolidate control before the public or regulators can respond. Thresholds, exemptions, and disclosure requirements are not technical housekeeping; they are policy choices that determine whether harmful concentration is exposed in time or hidden until the damage is entrenched.
To the Federal Trade Commission and the Department of Justice Antitrust Division:
I am submitting this comment as a citizen.
I am concerned about mergers, market concentration, and the growing power of a small number of very large companies.
This issue should not be dismissed as a paperwork question. The premerger reporting process is one of the few moments when government can see a merger before it reshapes a market. Once a deal closes, the public is too often told to accept the consequences as a fait accompli.
A competitor may be gone. Workers may have fewer places to work. Suppliers may have less power. Consumers may have fewer choices. Prices may rise. Local communities may lose control over parts of their economy.
The public question is simple:
When is enough enough?
How large does a company need to be? At what point does another merger stop helping the market and start hurting it? When does business size become market power? When does market power become private control over things citizens need?
Filing thresholds and exemptions are not minor technical details. They are the gates that decide which deals receive scrutiny and which are allowed to pass with minimal review.
If thresholds are set too high, too many transactions escape review. If exemptions are drafted too broadly, sophisticated firms can route around oversight. And if reporting rules are weakened in the name of efficiency, regulators may not recognize the danger until market power has already hardened.
The FTC and DOJ should treat premerger reporting as an early warning system, not as a paperwork burden.
Companies often say these filings cost too much or take too much time. But the better question is: cost to whom?
A longer filing may cost the merging companies time and money. But weak reporting costs the public much more later. Citizens pay through higher prices, fewer choices, weaker local businesses, lower worker bargaining power, weaker suppliers, worse service, and less control over concentrated private power.
The public should not find out about the harm only after the market has already been changed.
Existing Concentration Shows the Risk
This concern is not theoretical. Many markets citizens depend on are already highly concentrated. That means a small number of large companies control much of the market.
This is not always a monopoly. A monopoly means one company controls the market. An oligopoly means a small number of companies have so much power that real competition becomes weak.
| Examples of Existing Market Concentration | Examples of Existing Market Concentration | Examples of Existing Market Concentration |
| Industry / Market | Dominant Firms | Why It Matters |
| Airlines | American, Delta, United, Southwest | A few airlines shape most travel choices. Citizens feel this through fares, fees, routes, delays, and service quality. |
| Meatpacking — Beef and Pork | Tyson, Cargill, JBS, National Beef, and other large packers | A few processors stand between farmers, ranchers, stores, and consumers. This affects food prices, farmer leverage, and supply strength. |
| Pharmacy Benefit Managers | CVS Caremark, Express Scripts, OptumRx | Three middlemen sit between patients, insurers, pharmacies, and drug companies. They affect drug prices, pharmacy access, and patient costs. |
| Wireless Carriers | Verizon, T-Mobile, AT&T | Three national networks define most consumer choice. This affects price, coverage, service plans, and innovation. |
| Cloud Infrastructure | Amazon Web Services, Microsoft Azure, Google Cloud | A few firms control much of the digital infrastructure used by businesses, schools, hospitals, government, and public services. |
| Credit and Debit Card Networks | Visa, Mastercard, American Express, Discover | A few card networks sit between merchants and customers. Their fees and rules affect small businesses and consumer prices. |
| Broadband Internet Access | Comcast/Xfinity, Charter/Spectrum, AT&T, Verizon, Cox, and others depending on region | Many communities have only one or two real internet providers. This affects price, speed, service, school, work, health care, and civic life. |
This table does not mean every large company is breaking the law. It does not mean every listed industry is exactly the same.
The point is simpler.
The country already knows what consolidation can do. We see it in airlines. We see it in meatpacking. We see it in pharmacy benefits. We see it in wireless service. We see it in cloud computing. We see it in payments. We see it in broadband.
So when the government asks whether merger reporting should be changed, citizens have a right to ask:
Are these changes meant to help regulators see consolidation more clearly, or are they meant to make consolidation easier?
The issue is not whether big companies should be punished just for being big.
The issue is whether government should keep removing the friction that stops already concentrated markets from becoming even more concentrated.
The danger is not only monopoly. The danger is the stage before monopoly, when an industry still has several company names, but no longer has real competition.
Stewardship, Extraction, and Merger Review
There is a deeper issue here.
Merger review can protect stewardship, or it can allow extraction.
An extraction model treats a market, workforce, supply chain, local community, or digital system as something to be squeezed for short-term profit. Under this model, companies often use the word “efficiency.” But efficiency can mean fewer competitors, fewer employers, fewer local suppliers, fewer backup systems, fewer independent producers, and fewer points of public accountability.
A stewardship model treats an industry as a shared economic system. It asks whether the market remains healthy over time. It asks whether citizens still have real choices. It asks whether workers can move between employers. It asks whether suppliers can survive. It asks whether local communities remain strong. It asks whether future competitors still have a chance to enter the market.
Large size is not always bad. But size should serve the market. It should not govern the market.
The premerger reporting process should help regulators see the difference.
It should ask whether a deal strengthens a healthy market or whether it concentrates control in ways citizens will feel later. Citizens may feel that harm through higher prices, worse service, fewer choices, weaker wages, weaker suppliers, or blocked market entry.
This matters most in industries that already look like oligopolies. When an industry moves from many independent companies to three or four dominant firms, the public loses more than price competition. It loses choice. It loses local strength. It loses worker options. It loses supplier independence. It loses future innovation.
For that reason, the premerger form should work more like a market impact review.
It should not only ask whether the merging companies claim the deal will make them more efficient. It should ask whether the deal protects or weakens the market citizens depend on.
If capital naturally pushes toward more control, then government must provide friction. That friction includes disclosure, review, delay, public visibility, and access to information before a deal closes.
That is not red tape. That is public protection.
Questions the Agencies Should Ask
When the FTC and DOJ review a merger, they should not only ask whether the deal helps the companies. They should also ask how the deal affects citizens.
At minimum, the premerger form should require companies to answer these questions:
Does this deal reduce the number of independent employers, suppliers, producers, or new market entrants?
Does this deal create a bottleneck that lets one company, or a few companies, dictate terms to workers, suppliers, consumers, or smaller competitors?
Does this deal move decision-making, jobs, supply-chain control, data control, or infrastructure control away from local or competitive markets and into fewer hands?
Does this deal remove a future competitor, new technology, independent supplier, or different business model before it has a chance to compete?
If this deal closes, could a failure, abuse, or bad decision by the combined company cause wider harm because too much of the market depends on too few companies?
These questions do not punish companies for being large. They ask whether more size helps the market or controls it.
That difference should be central to any change in premerger reporting.
Areas Where Reporting Should Be Strengthened
I urge the FTC and DOJ to strengthen premerger reporting in at least five areas.
First, the agencies should require clear disclosure of non-traditional deal structures. Mergers are no longer always simple purchases of one company by another. Companies can gain control through acquihires, licensing deals, minority investments, staged deals, private equity rollups, management agreements, data-sharing arrangements, and other structures. The agencies should look at what the deal really does, not just what it is called.
Second, the agencies should narrow the exemption for deals described as “solely for investment.” A company should not be able to call itself a passive investor if it gains influence over another company. If the buyer gains board influence, information rights, veto rights, strategic access, or commercial leverage, the agencies should be able to review the deal.
Third, the agencies should require information about how the deal affects citizens. This should include likely effects on prices, product availability, local markets, service quality, wages, worker mobility, small suppliers, independent producers, data control, and access for new competitors.
Fourth, the agencies should require clearer disclosure of private equity, holding companies, affiliates, and related-party structures. Control can be hidden when ownership and financing are spread across many related entities. Regulators need to know who really controls the deal and how that control connects to other holdings.
Fifth, the agencies should require enough detail to test whether a deal harms future competition. The loss of a small company today may mean the loss of a serious competitor tomorrow. This is especially important in technology, health care, defense, food, agriculture, finance, logistics, housing, data, and other sectors where citizens already have limited choices.
The agencies should not let the premerger reporting process become another wall between citizens and private power.
If the reporting process is weakened, citizens may never see the deals that reshape the markets they depend on. By the time the harm becomes clear, the chance to act may already be gone.
This is why thresholds matter. This is why exemptions matter. This is why the content of the filing form matters.
These are not technical details. They are gates through which concentrated private power either passes unchecked or is forced into public view.
They decide whether consolidation is visible or hidden.
I urge the FTC and DOJ to strengthen, not weaken, the premerger notification process. The form should capture control, influence, market power, future competition, and citizen harm. It should not become a procedural shield behind which sophisticated firms can consolidate power with less scrutiny.
Before private parties are allowed to combine more market power, the public’s antitrust enforcers should have enough information to answer the question citizens are left asking after consolidation has already happened:
Was this necessary, or did we simply allow another competitive market to become an oligopoly?
Respectfully submitted, Thom Barrett Marstons Mills, MA
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These four cards come from the Federal Regulatory & Rollback Tracker, captured September 6, 2026. They are a dated selection, not a live feed or a finding that every proposal harms citizens. Review the notice, then adapt the suggested request. No personal experience is supplied for you.
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Vernal: minerals beneath Ouray National Wildlife Refuge
BLM is considering opening federal minerals beneath the refuge to leasing with no surface occupancy. Scoping can shape alternatives and analysis; this is not a completed leasing decision.
Comment date: October 5, 2026, as stated in the notice. Check for later changes.
Notice text checked September 6. Submission form itself not tested.
Suggested narrative and submission instructions
Please compare continued closure with the proposed leasing alternative. Explain how drilling from outside the refuge could affect water, wildlife and habitat, and what evidence supports the expected protections. Identify how public benefits, operator gains and potential public costs will be assessed. Please address any relevant studies submitted during scoping.
Open the BLM project page and locate its comment action. Alternatively mail BLM Vernal Field Office, 170 S 500 E, Vernal, UT 84078.
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EPA: water-pollution permitting exclusions
The tracker flags proposed changes to offshore pollutant-discharge permitting definitions and exclusions. Review the exact scope before asserting which activities would lose permit coverage.
Comment date: Tracker lists October 19, 2026. Confirm the date in the current official notice.
Notion record reviewed September 6; independent notice recheck incomplete.
Suggested narrative and submission instructions
Please identify which activities would no longer need permit authorization under this proposal, what protections would still apply, and how compliance would be checked. Compare any reduction in operator costs with possible costs to water quality and affected communities. Please explain the evidence supporting the proposed boundary and assess alternatives that retain effective public oversight.
Open the recorded Regulations.gov docket, find the proposed-rule document, and check its comment instructions. The docket link is not itself proof that a submission form is open.
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Silver Rock: transmission-line environmental review
The tracker identifies scoping for a transmission project in Utah and Nevada. This is a chance to request analysis of alternatives and public effects; it does not establish a net harm finding.
Comment date: Tracker lists October 5, 2026, or 15 days after the last scoping meeting, whichever is later. Confirm the meeting schedule before relying on the date.
Notion record reviewed September 6; independent notice recheck incomplete.
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Please compare feasible routes and alternatives using clear measures of community, habitat and land-use effects. Explain who is expected to receive the benefits, who may bear costs, and how those estimates were made. Identify the studies and assumptions that members of the public can inspect and challenge.
Use the recorded BLM project page to find comment instructions. Reconfirm these in the notice before sending. Recorded mail alternative: Attn: Michelle Campeau, 176 East D.L. Sargent Drive, Cedar City, UT 84721.
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Southern Ute: Mancos Shale development review
BLM and the Southern Ute Indian Tribe jointly lead this review of development on existing leases involving Tribal trust minerals. Tribal interests and authority must remain visible in the analysis.
Comment date: Listed October 5, 2026; notice also allows 15 days after the last public meeting, whichever is later. A September 24 meeting is listed. Confirm the final date with the agency; do not rely on October 5 as an unqualified final deadline.
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Please explain the alternatives and evidence used to assess water, air, habitat and community effects. Identify how development benefits and potential costs are distributed, including impacts on Tribal interests. Clarify which questions this programmatic review will answer and which will remain for later project decisions.
Open BLM ePlanning and search DOI-BLM-CO-S010-2026-0015-EIS. Mail alternative: BLM Tres Rios Field Office, Attn: Ryan Joyner, 29211 Highway 184, Dolores, CO 81323.
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